Here we both, Raven and Jay, talk about the other's writing; Only in a positive way! There is so much to choose from... I think I, Raven, will start first!
I think that Jay as a character really shows Jay as a writer's personality. The character really flourishes with the problems of a normal girl; Boys, Friends, and parents. I think that Jay's writing makes the character come alive in this story. The character Jay shows much thought toward the world, and wanting to see it. She longs for adventure and freedom. I think what really got me was that that was what Jay wanted, and that was exactly what Raven got. Jay as a writer achieved something all writers strive for; To get the point across to the reader. I love the funny stories she brings to life in your head. Thank you Jay, for giving us the gift of your words!
-- Raven
